Protection

Business as Usual
Jamie strode into the Artisan’s Quarter, easily pushing his way through the crowds. He kept an eye out for cutpurses. Not because he worried about his coin, he didn’t have much with him, just enough to bribe a couple guards, but rather because you could tell a lot about how things were by their presence. He spotted a couple he knew as Red-Nosed Ned’s men, that was good. A turf war or a guard crackdown would send them scurrying off. Not that it really mattered, Ned had given him a job to do and Jamie was going to do it regardless. Jamie headed for a thin stream of smoke and the sounds of hammer on anvil. The smith would probably be the hardest of his marks today. Royan was a hard man and wouldn’t react well to bullying. But I know just where to push to break him. It’s why Ned sent me. I know these people and I know what makes them weak.
Royan was at his forge hammering away at a hunk of metal. A young boy stood by the bellows. Jamie leaned against the wall and waited, watched the smith hammer away. He didn’t know what the smith was making and he really didn’t care. This was all about how would Royan react. The smith continued to hammer furiously at the metal. A few moments later, Royan spoke “May I help you?” He didn’t bother to look up and his voice was thick with…anger? He knows why I’m here, good. And playing ignorant too. Probably wants to delay this as much as possible. Alright, I can play that game for a bit. Jamie smiled. “What? You don’t remember me? It hasn’t been that long.” Jamie put as much mock indignation in the questions as he could.
The smith finally looked up, contempt clear on his face. “Oh, I remember you, Jamie. Tell me, how is your father doing these days?”
The smile vanished from Jamie’s face. He just had to bring that up. Time to get on with this. “You know full well why I’m here. You owe Ned and I’m here to collect.”
Royan turned to face Jamie and took a step forward, hammer in hand. “Or what? You’ll beat it out of me?”
Royan was big, but so was Jamie. However, he knew the direct approach wouldn’t work here. Even if Jamie won Royan probably wouldn’t pay, at least not reliably. Instead, he smiled and softened his voice. “You ought to know, your payment isn’t just for your safety. It also assures the safety of your shop and your wife… and your daughter.”
Royan anger quickly turned to worry. He knew where this was going, even if he didn’t want to admit it.
“How is Rayna doing? She’s what, 13 years old now? And growing prettier every day I hear.”
Royan had turned pale. “If you touch her…”
“I wouldn’t hurt Rayna.” Unless I had to. The thought hung grimly in his mind. “But the streets are awefully dangerous these days. There are many cruel people out there who wouldn’t hesitate to hurt a little girl.”
Sorrow filled the big smith’s face. “You bastard… you really would…”
He was trapped. Even with all his strength Royan couldn’t protect his daughter from the hundreds of blades waiting in the darkness, ready to descend upon a helpless little girl.
“We don’t ask for much. Isn’t it worth it to know Rayna is safe? Isn’t your daughter worth more than that?”
Royan closed his eyes and quietly nodded. He dug into his purse and counted out some coins. As Jamie’s hand closed around the coins, Royan said “May you burn in hell for this.”
“Just remember your family’s safety depends on your cooperation.” Jamie said as he left. His job was done. He headed out, back into the bustling, oblivious crowds. Royan was strong and proud and Jamie had broken him. All it had taken was a few lies and some bluster. He was still glad they didn’t have to follow through with any of it.
Balibar was a gnome, a wood carver, and a coward. He was also late with his payments. Jamie didn’t know why and he didn’t care. Truthfully, the half-man was the last Jamie would expect to renig on this.
Jamie barely noticed the door handle as he slammed into Balibar’s shop. He didn’t notice the masterfully carved chairs or the ornate box on display as he stormed up to the counter and the little boy behind it. “Where’s Balibar?” he snarled.
The little boy whimpered and pointed to a small door behind the counter, his eyes wide and frightened.
Balibar looked up from his work as Jamie walked into the workshop. Balibar barely had time to squeak as Jamie grabbed the gnome by the collar and dragged him up level with his face.
“Ned wants his money!” Jamie snarled, putting on his best ‘I’m about to break you in half’ face.
Balibar quivered in his grasp. I hope the half-man doesn’t piss himself. “I can’t pay all of you!” he wailed.
Jamie’s grip tightened. It was time to either hurt the gnome or cause significant property damage. Except something was wrong. Jamie’s eyes narrowed, looking for any sign of deception. “What do you mean ‘all of you’?”
“Two men came by… a week ago… demanded I pay them.. They were going to destroy my work!” Balibar panted out.
“Who were they?”
“They didn’t give names. They were big and had clubs.” Great, the rat just described every thug in town.
“One of them had scars on half his face and was missing an ear. Looked like it had been ripped off. The other had a squished up face, beady little eyes and a big nose.”
Jamie recognized the descriptions. The first was just called One Ear, but most of Ned’s men called him Dog Meat. Apparently a pack of dogs tore off his ear and half his face. Everyone joked that One Ear had been so ugly before, he was prettier with half a face. Jamie didn’t know the name of the second one, but that didn’t matter. They didn’t matter. Who they worked for was the important part. Both men worked for James Skinner, one of Ned’s rivals.
“How much did they take?”
Balibar told him, a look of growing confusion on the gnome’s face.
“You shoulda said something sooner. Pay what you owe Ned and I’ll deal with them.”
Balibar didn’t seem to certain of that. What guarantee did he have that Jamie wouldn’t just take the money and leave him? Guess he needs a reminder of who’s in charge. Jamie brought the gnome’s face in real close to his. “Or I could just smash your precious sticks and take what you owe us if you’d prefer.”
That made up Balibar’s mind real quick. When Jamie had the money he walked silently out of the shop. He saw no need to reassure the gnome. Balibar was under Ned’s protection. That meant no one else was allowed to shove the half-man around. Now Jamie needed to find one of James’s men. It was time for some payback.
Jamie got lucky and spotted the beady eyed thug a little while later.Jamie followed him as he entered an alley way. Jamie stayed a little ways back until the thug turned the corner. There, out of sight from the passing crowds, Jamie struck.
Jamie was far from the quietest, but the thug was stupid and wasn’t paying attention. He barely turned around in time to see Jamie’s club before it smashed into the side of his head. The thug hit the side of the alley, stunned by the blow. Before he could recover, Jamie swept his legs out, sending the big man sprawling.
“Gimme your money!” Jamie demanded.
The thug struggled to his knees, his hand going for the knife at his belt. He was far too slow. Jamie’s club slammed into the thug’s shoulder with the crunch of breaking bone. He screamed, but the crowds were plenty loud enough. No one would ever hear one more voice crying out.
Jamie kicked the man in his broken shoulder, rolling him onto his back. “Money. Now.”
The thug groaned, but tossed aside two purses, clinking with coin. Jamie grabbed them and pointed his club at the thug. “You tell James that Balibar belongs to us. You stay out of our territory or I’ll make another example of them.” Just to drive the point home, Jamie slammed his club into the man’s knee. “Got it?” The thug nodded, tears leaking from his eyes as Jamie walked out of the shadows of the alley.
When he returned Jamie ignored the kid, heading straight for the door to Balibar’s workshop. Balibar cowered until Jamie pulled out a purse and started counting out coins, then he just looked on incredulously. “There,” Jamie said, “you’re under our protection. They shouldn’t have stolen from you. If they come back, don’t pay them and come find us immediately after.”
Jamie walked out of the store with Balibar stammering his gratitude. Outside, Jamie allowed himself a smile. Now this was some work he could feel good about. It was time to head back to Ned. He’d want to hear about James trying to muscle in on his turf. There might be some real fighting soon. Jamie was alright with that.
Night of Nightmares
Jamie leaned back in the warm, friendly glow of Ned’s hall. His brothers walked the hall, singing, laughing, and dicing. Gery had a group gathered around, his big hands deftly shuffling a pack of cards. Dave watched, a coin dancing idly across the back of his hand. The mageling swore it was just quick fingers, not a spell, but Jamie wasn’t so sure. Gery waved for him to come over. First Jamie took another look around.
Where was Bobby and Sam and Ari? They ought to be here. Where was Ned? This was his hall, his people! He ought to be at the front with a flagon in his hand, a girl on his lap and a laugh of his lips! Something was very wrong.
It was cold and dark. One of the men had a torch, but it gave off no heat and did little to hold back the darkness. They huddled together, fear marring their faces. Jamie had a knife in his hand, blood bright on the blade, but he didn’t know whose. The walls loomed close in the darkness, cold, hard and dangerous.
A shudder ran through the ground and their horrid cellar sprang to life. Men screamed, the walls exploded and hands left from stone, so cold and hard and dangerous. They clung to clothes, grabbed at flesh and dragged men to their deaths.
The shadows shifted, they were running, but something was wrong. Jamie looked back and Gery was on the floor, cold stone hands grasping his arms and legs, pulling him into the floor. He called for help, begged for it. Silent Tom’s voice cut through the darkness, steel through silk, “Run, you fool.” Jamie ran and Gery died, screaming.
They were in a wooden room. Safe wood, not stone, but nothing was safe anymore. Through the windows Jamie saw the world burn. Doom had come to Khadim with fire and darkness. Dave groaned, his flesh rippling beneath his clothes. His scream split through their minds as his body tore itself apart.
Jamie was on the stairs, watching as the grotesque mockery that used to be Dave walked up the stairs. His head and limbs were no longer attached to his body, instead floating several inches from it. Large strips of flesh were missing from his body and he left a thick trail of blood as he climbed, slowly up each step. Thin rivers of flame ran down his arm as Dave reached a hand towards Jamie. There was a club in Jamie’s hand. His arm swung around and Dave’s head hit the wall with a wet thump. Silent Tom’s voice whispered from the shadows, “Run, you fool.” Jamie ran as his friend’s body collapsed on the stairs.
Jamie ran and the shadows surrounded him. Gery's face floated in the darkness, staring accusingly at him, cold and grey like the stones Jamie abandoned him to. Dave's face stared with one good eye, the side of his head cave in where Jamie had killed him. They stared in mute accusation and the flames lept up to consume him.
Jamie woke up covered in a cold sweat, curled up under a ragged blanket. Someone coughed in the darkness. There refuge was cold and damp. They had survived the destruction of the world, but now what?
Captain Mal Wants You!
“Did I tell you to bring back money?” Tom said softly.
“Well, no…” The big man replied. He was new and Jamie didn’t remember his name, Boulder or Rock or something like that. Jamie didn’t trust him.
“Money is practically useless now. Everything costs ten times as much and you bring me a few grubby coins that couldn’t buy a crust of bread.” Tom always spoke softly. He didn’t need to raise his voice. They were all terrified of him. “Food, clothing, weapons, these are what we need. These are what you will bring back or these are what you’ll go without.”
Everything had changed and Jamie hated it. They stole from people who had nothing. Last time a woman had begged him to just kill her quick. It was mercy, but it still gnawed at him. There were a dozen men and women, ragged and weary, in their small hideout. Silent Tom had kept the few survivors from Ned’s gang together and recruited more. Tom had saved his life, just like Ned had years ago, and Jamie owed him for that. Still, Jamie wondered if it was all worth it. Crawling along and preying on the helpless, this was no way to live.
Suddenly the door to their hideout crashed open and soldiers rushed in, swords and spears in hand. They bolted for the backdoor, but that opened to show more soldiers. They were surrounded and surprised. They could fight, Jamie had a club and dagger at his belt, but there wasn’t any point. He would just die and Jamie wasn’t quite ready for that mercy yet. The soldiers held them at sword point, but didn’t kill them.
In walked another soldier, tall and handsome with his armor well polished. Everyone recognized Captain Alec Mal. They all knew to avoid him like the plague. Silent Tom gave him a thin smile, his thin daggers still in hand. “Captain, to what do I owe this… honor?”
“Stow it Tom. I’m giving you a choice. I could arrest you right now and put you on trial for your crimes.”
“Oh, I didn’t know you’d kept some magistrates around.”
“No, the trial will just be me saying you’re guilty and ordering your execution. I’ve got no time for a proper trial. The other option is to work for the City Guard.”
“A pardon…”
“I said nothing about a pardon. You’ll still be a murderer, you’ll just be working for me. The same offer for all of you. You may work for the guard or you may pay the price for your crimes now.”
Tom paused, eyeing the Captain. Jamie didn’t need to consider. There was no real choice here. He wasn’t going to say anything before Tom did, but if Tom chose death, Jamie wouldn’t be following him. Tom came to the same decision. “Of course, it would be a pleasure to serve.” His mouth smiled, but his eyes stared murder at the Captain. The others made the same choice.
They were still disarmed and tied up to be dragged off, but they were treated well enough and true to his word, Captain Mal allowed them to work for the guard. The gang was broken up, Jamie didn’t know any of the others they had him working with. They were regular guardsmen, other criminals granted Mal’s Mercy, or citizens that saw a better opportunity than dying in the gutters. Jamie didn’t trust them any more than he trusted what Ned’s gang turned into. Still, life was a bit better. Captain Mal had him on patrols and hunting down monsters. He hadn’t felt so alive in a long time. With his blood pumping and a sword in his hand, it felt good to fight to protect his city.

Comments
Formatting
The formatting on this kind of sucks and I can't figure out how to fix it. Some proper breaks between paragraphs would help a lot.
The italics are Jamie's internal thoughts. It is the formatting I use in other PbP games. I'll change it if you'd prefer I didn't use it.
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Sorry to jump in your game, I
Sorry to jump in your game, I had to fix some formating that was breaking the page.
A word of note for people new to the site. We use a What You See Is What You Get (WYSIWYG) editor on the site and it doesn't play well with word processing programs. If you write something in Word be sure to click the paste button with the little W on it instead of the regular paste button. This strips out the excess codes and helps to keep the page from breaking.
If you use OpenOffice.org use the same button. It doesn't strip out everything but does help.
If you use the WYSIWYG editor you can just use it like any other word processing program.
If you're one of the oddballs like me who likes to use the plain text editor; to keep the game from breaking when it's edited be sure to use <br /> at the end of each line, including blank lines. Do not use <div>, <span>, or <p> tags as these can cause problems if the piece is later edited in the WYSIWYG editor. I know using the <br /> tags are not recommended practice to separate paragraphs but due to the nature of the games here and the quirks of the WYSIWYG editor it's the solution that best keeps the page formating from breaking.
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Thank you for the formatting
Thank you for the formatting help. I've been trying to figure out how to fix those breaks.
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Those of us who write HTML
Those of us who write HTML will always be around to help. One thing I'm going to write for my game is a Guide Page that covers the styles for the different fonts and how best to write the game updates. I'm also going to see about getting the styles into the stuff that this editor knows about, so you can just pick them from a list.
That would be really cool
That would be really cool Imajica.
Another Thing
This isn't a big deal, so no worries if you can't remedy it.
But I'm noticing that at the very very very bottom of just your AFTER pages, there are some smiley icons. I'm thinking it has something to do with the extra work you've gone through to get this working, and I wanted to bring it to your attention in case you didn't notice it.
Again, it's at the very bottom and only seems to be affecting the AFTER pages, so no big deal if it can't be fixed.
Y'know, I'd not even noticed
Y'know, I'd not even noticed them! How strange is that! Must be something to do with the inline stylesheet but I can't imagine what. I'll do some sourcecode digging, see what comes up.
Thanks!
Dunno if this helps at all,
Dunno if this helps at all, but I also noticed that IE7 here at work gives me an error whenever I pull up an AFTER page. For example, with this page, I get:
Line: 621
Char: 7
Error: Object doesn't support this property or method
Code: 0
URL: http:/www.nextgenrpg.com/content/after/protection
That gives me something
That gives me something specific to look for. At least someone out there is still using IE. I gave up on it years ago. Now I have a veritable smorgasboard of browsers - Opera, Chrome, Iron, Flock, Firefox, Konqueror, Lynx, Amaya (purely for the masochistic browser/editor but you get a real thrill when a page renders properly in it!), Safari. I could use a different browser every day of the week if I wanted to! What fun!
I'll take a look at the specific line you've quoted and see what shows up in Firebug. I suspect it's something to do with the style point tracker...
Glad to be of service. Hey,
Glad to be of service.
Hey, if there's something you can count on in a government agency, it's that they stand firmly on the rearback of technology.
New Content
I've updated Jamie's prologue with new content. Hopefully the formatting is better on this part. I copied it into notepad before recopying it to here. There ought to be more space between the three sections, but I can't figure out how to do that. Adding extra spaces on the editor doesn't work.
There are 6 lines between this sentence and the one above it in the editor.
Perhaps the 3 sections should be separate documents.
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Geech, What program do you
Geech, What program do you use to write the text before you paste it to the site? Maybe I can help you figure out how to fix it. Also, do you use the plain text editor or the WYSIWYG one?
Putting more then two <br /> tags between paragraphs doesn't really add more space. Web pages are rendarded slightly different than print documents or ones that you view on screen in a word processor. Extra space can be done but not without using code which could possibly break page formatting if it's edited later.
We usually use asterisks (*) to break up sections as those are easier to control the spacing before and after than a hard rule but if you prefer the hard rule it's fine, just a bit harder to get to behave. If you're adding the hard rule in the WYSIWYG editor than you should be able to add an extra line above and/or below it. If you're using the plain text editor and manually entering the HTML it should look like this.
End of paragraph one.
<br />
<br />
<hr>
<br />
<br />
Beginning of next paragraph.
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If you want to mail me the
If you want to mail me the document in word formatted how you want it to look, I'll make sure the HTML looks just right...
Usually if you use the
Usually if you use the clipboard button with the blue 'W' on it, that is located at the top of the editor, it will paste over fine, directly from your word processor.
It looks fine to me, so no issues here. Those division bars can get a little wacky though about adding extra line breaks. I'll see if I can fix it for you by clicking on source and adding some breaks in there.
Chairman wrote:Usually if you
This is only true if someone is using Word as their word processor. It helps some with OpenOffice.org (the word processor I and a few others on the site use) but does not strip out everything.
Sorry guys, going on a little rant here. This is not to pick on China as I see this same thing everywhere, this just happens to be the post I'm replying to.
You cannot assume everyone uses the same software and what works for one specific program will work across the board. Yes, Microsofts products are the main programs in use here in the US, and possibly in a number of other countries as well, but they are not the only ones out there.
Microsoft's products do a lot of things that are not standard practice and what works to overcome the quirks of them usually doesn't work with other programs. Therefore, you need to know which program someone is using before you can say "do this and it will work" and have it be the case. You may give the correct advice for 9 out of 10 people but for that 10th person it's going to cause even more frustration.
End of rant.
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I use Word 2007 to originally
I use Word 2007 to originally write the document, but I copied it to notepad before recopying it to the site. I see a 'switch to plain text editor' link below this, so I'm assuming that I've been using the WYSIWYG editor.
In general the formatting is fine. I just thought that adding some extra space around the second and third titles might make them look better and be easier to find. Of course, I'm not reading the document straight through. Heatwave's suggestions should be enough. I don't want to create extra work for anyone else.
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If you see the "switch to
If you see the "switch to plain text editor" link than you are using the WYSIWYG editor. There are so many versions of Word it's possible the paste button with the little W on it doesn't work right with all of them. Copying it into notepad first is a sure way of getting rid of all the junk formating.
You should be able to add a line before and after the hard rule but it can be tricky in the editor so you might have to try something, do a preview to see if it works, then rinse and repeat until it looks right.
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Imagination is the seed of intelligence. Nourish it and watch it grow.
I had a lovely rant all
I had a lovely rant all penned and ready for this. I just can't be bothered trotting out the arguments that I know no-one listens to.
Instead, I shall make a recommendation: Amaya. This is the W3C's web browser and editor. It sticks to the standards, it's available as a portable app (http://portableapps.com/node/19905) which means you can run it from a USB stick and not have to worry about being able to install it on your computer at work. You can write beautifully clean code in there and not have to worry about all the Word cruft being carried across when you copy/paste over from your editor to this site.
Personally, I use Google Docs. But I know people have issues with Google storing their data and selling it to the highest bidder in the future. Well, the world might end any day when Yellowstone erupts so I'm not particularly bothered about that right now.
Anyway. This is giving me more impetus to write the guide page explaining the different HTML formats and what we need to write the best code possible on this site.
I know Heatwave will disagree with me on one point, mind - I prefer to use <p>...</p> to split things up as you can better apply styling to text created this way than not. You've just got to remember that closing </p> as browsers don't enforce it.
I was curious about using
I was curious about using <p>.
A someone who finds himself elbow-deep in XML on a regular basis, enclosed tags are second nature, so I have to restrain myself when editing my entries here.
Always close the tag! It's
Always close the tag! It's one of the things that bugs me about Drupal 6. I'm hoping that full (X)HTML compliance will come with Drupal 7. There's nothing worse than the chaos caused by an unclosed <div> on a Drupal site!
Out of interest, what do you use to edit XML? I used XMLSpy for a while when I needed to, now I tend to do everything in Komodo...
Right there with ya, sir. I
Right there with ya, sir. I always close tags; like I said, I'm a XML guy first, then HTML.
Unfortunately, I can't use XMLSpy (as much as I would want to) where I work because of byzantine security issues (takes too long to explain). It would be my main choice if I could, though.
Imajica wrote:I know Heatwave
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to split things up as you can better apply styling to text created this way than not. You've just got to remember that closing
as browsers don't enforce it.
Nope, I agree 100% on the <p>...</p> format. When I code web pages, and here I'm a relic as I still code by hand, I use the <p>...</p> format all the time.
The problem I've found using that format on this site is when someone goes in and edits a page with the WYSIWYG editor it can sometimes nest the tags and cause all sorts of weird formating issues. This isn't a problem when the <br /> tags are used. It's not my preferred way of coding and it bugs me but it works with the least trouble.
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